Rabu, 01 Mei 2013

The Great Ever Lost





 The Poor Piglet

Life is very precious. No one can deny that he or she will never feel the true happiness even the real sadness. We must be ready to face this life because every single that we do will bring out the result for us. War is one of suitable word as reflection between human and their destiny because both of them have strong relation to fulfill each other. Sometimes our destiny is about losing someone or something special even really important for us is part of it. It makes us depress, regret, stress even want to suicide. So, I decide that I have to keep what I have now because a chance never come twice to me.
            I forgot when that tragedy happen because it hurt me so much. I saw my mother in hurry, she looked afraid and panic. I was doubt to ask her what happen. Five minutes passed, my niece came to my house and she showed the same expression as my mother did. It made me wanted to know the thing that they would do. The first thing which rose on my mind was about money but I was totally wrong. They helped pig pregnant. My mother was happy because her pig had twelve piglets which gave her advantage. I saw her baby really weak and could not walk fast but they were so funny.
            One day, my mother had to come to my uncle’s ceremony. She told me to take care her pig and feed the pig on time. I said yes to her when she prepared something. My mother went away and let her pig in my protection. I turned on television because there was good program that I had waited. I enjoyed and forgot to feed her pig until evening. Surprisingly, my mother stood behind me and made me shocked. While I saw my mother face at that time, I remembered pig. I ran fast to see the condition of pig and her babies. Finally, I could not believe about what I had seen.
            The mother of babies pig had lay on the ground without movement and three of her babies had died. I was speechless and cried. My mother came and asked my why. I was afraid with her because I broke her belief that she gave to me. My mother was angry to me and took carrion of babies pig. From that moment, my mother ignore me for a day. I apologized her in order to make the condition became usual and promised to her that I would never do the same thing like I had done at that time. She forgave me easily and asked me not to repeat that worst one. I always remember what my mother said to me and teach me become responsible person and will never lose something again because one minute leave it means that we will never ask it to go back.

4 komentar:

  1. i like your story and funny. i think you should keep you ability in writing and make new idea, interesting story

    BalasHapus
  2. funny story lis.
    I understand your writing easily because you use simple word, simple stucture and good organize from one event to another events. Don't be sad and take lesson from this experience. Doing your job was given by your mother well.
    have a nice day...

    BalasHapus
  3. It's a great story Elis. I even could not guess that the story was about pig. I like the way you write the idea. It systematic, so the reader will surprise when knew that the thing happened is about the pig.. in other time, don't forget to do your obligation Elis :)
    Very good :)

    BalasHapus
  4. concreng, your writing is really something... like Syahrini said "sesuatu" wwkwkwk..
    what makes that story funny? the answer is when you saw your mother's face and you remember about pig. you know? it's like you say ' her face is like pig' ehehehe...
    kidding creng.. V
    your writing is easy to understand and entertain me so much.. :D

    BalasHapus