The
Poor Piglet
Life is very precious.
No one can deny that he or she will never feel the true happiness even the real
sadness. We must be ready to face this life because every single that we do will
bring out the result for us. War is one of suitable word as reflection between
human and their destiny because both of them have strong relation to fulfill
each other. Sometimes our destiny is about losing someone or something special
even really important for us is part of it. It makes us depress, regret, stress
even want to suicide. So, I decide that I have to keep what I have now because
a chance never come twice to me.
I
forgot when that tragedy happen because it hurt me so much. I saw my mother in
hurry, she looked afraid and panic. I was doubt to ask her what happen. Five
minutes passed, my niece came to my house and she showed the same expression as
my mother did. It made me wanted to know the thing that they would do. The
first thing which rose on my mind was about money but I was totally wrong. They
helped pig pregnant. My mother was happy because her pig had twelve piglets
which gave her advantage. I saw her baby really weak and could not walk fast
but they were so funny.
One
day, my mother had to come to my uncle’s ceremony. She told me to take care her
pig and feed the pig on time. I said yes to her when she prepared something. My
mother went away and let her pig in my protection. I turned on television
because there was good program that I had waited. I enjoyed and forgot to feed
her pig until evening. Surprisingly, my mother stood behind me and made me
shocked. While I saw my mother face at that time, I remembered pig. I ran fast
to see the condition of pig and her babies. Finally, I could not believe about
what I had seen.
The
mother of babies pig had lay on the ground without movement and three of her
babies had died. I was speechless and cried. My mother came and asked my why. I
was afraid with her because I broke her belief that she gave to me. My mother
was angry to me and took carrion of babies pig. From that moment, my mother
ignore me for a day. I apologized her in order to make the condition became
usual and promised to her that I would never do the same thing like I had done
at that time. She forgave me easily and asked me not to repeat that worst one.
I always remember what my mother said to me and teach me become responsible
person and will never lose something again because one minute leave it means
that we will never ask it to go back.
i like your story and funny. i think you should keep you ability in writing and make new idea, interesting story
BalasHapusfunny story lis.
BalasHapusI understand your writing easily because you use simple word, simple stucture and good organize from one event to another events. Don't be sad and take lesson from this experience. Doing your job was given by your mother well.
have a nice day...
It's a great story Elis. I even could not guess that the story was about pig. I like the way you write the idea. It systematic, so the reader will surprise when knew that the thing happened is about the pig.. in other time, don't forget to do your obligation Elis :)
BalasHapusVery good :)
concreng, your writing is really something... like Syahrini said "sesuatu" wwkwkwk..
BalasHapuswhat makes that story funny? the answer is when you saw your mother's face and you remember about pig. you know? it's like you say ' her face is like pig' ehehehe...
kidding creng.. V
your writing is easy to understand and entertain me so much.. :D