Selasa, 02 April 2013



My Dream House

Another someday is come and gone away
Event Paris and Rome  but I wanna go home
                                                                        Song by Michael Buble


House is a last purpose to come back. There is no other comfort place event we have small house and a bit facilities but it’s still own house. One place that safe us from cold and sun.
In the future I have been married and live with two sons and one daughter in happiness. They will run away and do everything in house. When my husband come and knock the door, I will open to address him with smile. I will take his bag and let him to sit on the chair while I prepare dinner. My daughter and sons will come when they listen their father has came. I will prepare dinner for them in dining room soon because I know that they hungry. We eat together and tell everything that we have done in that day.
I need small house for live but everything must be ready in that house such as table, chair, refrigerator, microwave, bad, television and small garden behind my house. My house will have two degreed. For up stair, it will be for night time and down stair for daily activities such as playing, cooking, Watching television and other thing. When I have spare time, I will play soccer with my sons in the garden and play doll with my daughter while i wait their father. When bed time is come, I will direct them to go up and tell them story until they fall sleep.
Home sweet home, it is word that I really like so much. Big or small at least it’s still our house. Big or small will never indicate that house give us true happiness. Big or small will make us comfort if we know how to treat that house. Nice house is not looked by size but how we create good thing in order tour house is looked big because we fulfill with love.

3 komentar:

  1. Hi, Elis. i really like your writing that's make me easy to understand and i can imagine what will happen on the future. i like when you said "When my husband come and knock the door, I will open to address him with smile. I will take his bag and let him to sit on the chair while I prepare dinner. My daughter and sons will come when they listen their father has came. I will prepare dinner for them in dining room soon because I know that they hungry. We eat together and tell everything that we have done in that day." i want to have a lovely wife like you who really care with her family also. :)
    I hope that will be happen in the future.
    keep spirit life! (y)


    BalasHapus
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  3. elis, after reading your description essay, i can imagine how nice your dream will be. I find a mistake in your essay, such as "One place that safe us from cold and sun", it is not a sentence you should make it become a sentence. Then you should give more attention with grammar that you use, you wrote"In the future I have been married and live with two sons and one daughter in happiness". It is more appropriate to use simple future tense (s+v1+o) to explaining something in the future but over all is good. I think in your dream house later you will be happy and harmonious live with your family...^_^

    BalasHapus